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I greatly prefer the edited version. In fact, I really liked the line “Stoking fears about land title loss reflects a colonial mindset that ignores the historical reality of how Indigenous lands were taken in the first place.” Excellent point! I found the unedited sentences to be more hostile than thoughtful.

Besides that, the unedited description of the mayor’s letter as “disingenuous” rubbed me the wrong way. In fact, I thought it itself was disingenuous, since the unedited version acknowledged that the status of claims was unresolved… so the resolution “could negatively effect the title to [people’s] property.” From what I’ve read in these two versions, the mayor’s letter seems like a reasonable notification to their constituents, in the same way that notifying people of an approaching hurricane could be appropriate even before the storm’s path is fully resolved.

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